Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

You Hold the Baby

You hold the baby,
I値l hold the knife.

You guard the belly,
I値l guard the wife.

You take the credit,
I値l take the life.

You hold the baby,
I値l hold the strife.

Author notes

First poem in awhile. Sorry, it is what it is.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • samantha jean
    November 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wow, I love the flow of this piece. Quick, matter-of-fact, and comfortable to read.
    Great write.


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    RT- good to see you posting here...

    a deep and thoughtful writing here ...Solomon and wisdom, and choices we would all rather never happen...PK