Sirens song lovely
yet sad
Something in this song
is way too wrong... why?
Captivity's hold
though beautiful
still suspends
the siren faery
and her song
remains tearful
catching all who hear
in its spell
crying...
Author notes
prompt: http://dl4.glitter-graphics.net/pub/999/999734yqlbloeokb.jpg
PIF contest picture prompt.
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
1500 points, ended December 7, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done Best of luck in the contest

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Very magical yet so sad.The last stanza tugged hard at my heart.I wish you all the best in the contest.
~Angel-anne~


