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Beautiful Sadness

Sirens song lovely
yet sad
Something in this song
is way too wrong... why?

Captivity's hold
though beautiful
still suspends
the siren faery
and her song
remains tearful
catching all who hear
in its spell
crying...

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  • penman gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done Best of luck in the contest


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Very magical yet so sad.The last stanza tugged hard at my heart.I wish you all the best in the contest.
    ~Angel-anne~