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PRACTICE 7 - The Ocean

Mum got me to write a list of words beginning with S about the sea and then make a poem using some of them.



Splashing and smashing the rocks
then the water sprays out
then sails away.

Silver sea slimes away
like a snake
splashing the water
over the rails.

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  • StarEyes
    December 1, 2008

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    Well done! Both of you! This is fantastic! Making me wish I were at the ocean right now! Ohhhhh how relaxing that would be!

    and love

    Nana


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    This is wonderful...

    And well done mum, was a great idea...
    Great little piece that paints a picture in the mind of the reader that enthralls & captivates throughout...
    Well done!!!