I miss you.
I feel slow and empty from head to toe.
And I couldn't even say Goodbye! See ya!
It came too fast,
and I asked myself- Where are you?
Time doesn't forgive and I want to go.
But now I just wish I could have
stayed.
And watched.
To see what the world has to give me!
There's so much.
If I would have
stayed, I would have had more strength than now.
That's why,
I miss you.
The sea, the Earth, the simple
feelings that you gave me.
But my heart is persistent,
and I will come back
sometime.
And it will all be the same, in fact it will be
better.
Just as good as old wine.
But for now I miss you,
and some day you will be mine.
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i like it. its a really good form of free verse and it really flows.
The sea, the Earth, the simple
feelings that you gave me.
But my heart is persistent,
and I will come back
sometime.
i really like these lines, very descriptive. good job!
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