i sit here every night.
i think to myself is it faith?
is it faith that is keeping us together?
is there really a thing such of faith?
all these things ive done wrong.
i cant believe you even put up with me.
im doing all i can do to keep this together.
i cant let this go to waste.
i cant let my helpless point of view ruin this.
now i believe that there must be a thing called faith.
if not...then please tell me whats keeping us together?
A contest entry
- NO MORE ENTRYS. by Ginger Woods.
700 points, ended January 1, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
im not to great but what do u think?
Comments
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I like it, but I think it could use a tad bit of work, It could be longer, more unique, and deeper detailed. I'm sorry I'm so rough but there's so many entrys I need to be picky. Thank you for your entry though, and good luck.
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I enjoyed this poem. It captures exactly how many people feel about faith and love. Thanks for the comment. I also like how you worded this. I am sure you will come up with many more great poems! Good luck!
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yes, its faith duh. =].....or fate? i dont know.
im just glad that whatever it is,is. i like your questioning. i like it! =)
i love you.
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