and leaving fingerprints
on already
loose bones.
he is uninvited - - -
Author notes
sorry if this doesn't amaze you! [it probably won't]
but that's what I got from the prompt.
In a list
A contest entry
- in 10 stupendous words by Lavender Butterfly.
515 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
kind but constructive criticism please.
Comments
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you are an absoulutely amazing writer!!
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Thank you.
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ah so haunting indeed... x
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Thank you, for both the comment and the HM.
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this has a haunting feel to it
and this leaves so much interpretation left open to the reader
very well penned -
'he is uninvited' -This line is great. It evokes so many questions for me.
Beautiful piece. -
fawk,
this is brilliance in ten words all right :] ♥
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it does amaze me
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