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Fringed-Arctic Haiku

White fur fringed eyes gleam
black coals on a frozen hill-
Ten yards to safe cage

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  • RareFlower
    January 18

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    exquisite style

    I am new to poetry so I have never come across this style before.. Your words are beautiful and deep.. wow.. I love it
    RareFlower
    P.s thankyou for your lovely comment on my poem- Hope.


  • The Fun House gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Ah this one makes the hair stand up on the back of your neck. White wolf? A nicely done haiku, good imagery

    • Mary O gold member
      December 20, 2008
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      No, Polar Bear lurking or preying: from a story my niece tells when working in Pruedo Bay at the North Pole. They have safe cages when going from one building to another.
      Thanks for your nice comment
      ~Mary O