Night is dark
and often means late.
Night means bedtime
Which I really hate.
Please tell me what you think
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Graet Poem
I used to hate bedtime as well then I turned into a teenager, after that I could sleep all day long.
Beautiful poem thanks for sharing with us
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You have written a poem with excellent rhyme
But the darkness shows many wonderful sights
I also hate to come in for bed time,
Rather look at the stars and silver moon light
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Oh man, who doesn't hate their bedtime. The rhyme scheme was great, good job!
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Bethany,
This is fantastic! What a great job! I think all kids hate bedtime
I know my boys did!
Great job!
and love
Nana
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Arr... Bedtime, the 10 yr old's Nemesis...
Pretty, heartfelt piece with a wonderful rhyme scheme that made me smile in remembrance of that time...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Wonderful!
Wonderful rhyme, and straight from your heart.
Better ask mummy if you can stay up late to write poetry.
But make sure your in bed early Christmas Eve.
Cause he knows if you are sleeping, he knows if your awake.He knows if you are good or bad! So be good for goodness sake!
Well done Bethany i really enjoyed your beautiful poetry.
Keep it up.
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