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PRACTICE 5 - Rocking Horse

Rocking backwards and forwards fast
Making children smile and laugh.

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  • StarEyes
    December 1, 2008

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    Ok, I think I am gonna get you to write some short peices for the day care I want to open later... This is great, full of vivid imagery, all you need with it is a picture! Great job!

    and love

    Nana


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Cool...

    A moment in time captured vividly in the mind of the reader & as pretty as a picture...
    Another great piece...
    Well done!!!