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Living

Is this really living
I have this vague misgiving
That I'm not really alive
Maybe I needed to revive.
To think a happy thought
rather than be so distraught.

Still as I sit here in this room
I can't help but think it's a tomb
I'm missing out on something
I know as I cling
to what I know
I wish I could grow.

To change
to not be so strange
To live a life
instead of all this strife.
I wish I could be
like a butterfly you see.

To fly in the sky and be free
but most of all...to be alive!

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    November 30, 2008

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    I try my best to be optimistic but it's really hard, this is how I feel so often and it's hard to stray away from these feelings but we do need to live and to make the most of life whilst we're living it.


    • DarkStatic
      December 1, 2008
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      Meh I've grown somewhat pessimistic over the years. I guess it's just something that happened over time...don't know why but sometimes I don't see the point in such things.