She covers the ground with hre pure white blanket.
Her breath freezes the air with her frosty kisses.
The rain comes down and washes her away.
Snow will be back again.
Author notes
I learnt about personification at school so I tried to write a poem of it.
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: YOUR FAVORITE PREWRITE by Sky Prince Ireland.
800 points, ended December 15, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can see you learned well about personification.
Great poem. Thanks for entering my contest.
Good luck.
Brian -
Hi Baby...
Good to see and mommy back! I have missed you both! This is fantastic! I love how you picked snow, and the way you personified it! That is fantastic!
and love
Nana
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Wow... Such beauty in your words...
Love the personification of the snow, gives it a magical air that was both enchanting & a delight to read...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Bethany, you are wonderful!
I could not be prouder of you my princess. This poem is so thoughtful and beautiful, it amazes me. Well done precious girl!
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