the thing that blinds and desives me
makes me feel unclean
unworthy as it were
lost....
lost i am
i try to stay awake and rember my name
all i feel is shame
and only i am to blame
wondering around blindly
hopeing
even praying
for a way out
they say that one day it will all clear and that one day we will have rid of this
im not sure that it will pass
i fear i will be left here to lose myself in this dark
Fog
A contest entry
- Write me a poem about FOG! by poetrandy.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Again, a most deftly done piece relating a common, but no less real fear. Wonderfully expressed!!! bravo!!!
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hmmm, interesting, I can relate to this one. well done.
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Good write emily ^^ I like this one
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thankyou
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Good Poem!
I like this one, but you should check your spelling! Good luck in the contest!
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what did i spell wrong ?
i have dyslexica i have trouble with spelling thankyou for the luck
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