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Cold Outside.(Rondelet)

It's cold outside
with wind chill feels below zero
It's cold outside
By the fireplace I will abide
comforted by it's warming glow
thrilled by my sweet one's kiss or so
It's cold outside.

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  • WhiteAngelCake
    November 30, 2008

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    Okay... I don't think you read my contest rules. Yes, my contest is titled "Winter Contest". You may enter my contest again, but re-read my rules and the little paragraph thingy. This is a good poem. I like the 5th line.