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Hunger

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Feed My Addiction



Suck My Skittle Like A Lollipop



Dip Your Candy Bar In My Chocolate



Churn My Melting Pot



Cover me With Your Warm Creamy Glaze

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The pictures used with this write I do not claim as my own. Pictures found on yahoo images.

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  • darell
    December 4, 2008

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    Oh yeah!

    All that baby. OIL OF DAT!!!hehehehehe!
    This was wicked good. A taste of honey
    sweet succulence all dipped in chocolate
    divine. Keep pumping them out girlfriend.


  • Dark Otter
    December 3, 2008
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    Yummmmm!!!

    A taste of chocolate that I could go for!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    Did someone turn the heat up in here? lol
    I love every line in this write and for only five,
    you really brought a lot of imagery and creativity
    to this piece. Lovely work as always my dear! It's a pleasure to read you again. Take care and keep them coming!




    Jeremy0826


  • Desire gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    Is this Willy Wonka's store

    Heat to singe in five lines~
    Now for the diabetics out there~ this can certainly raise their blood sugar ya know

    but heck at least he or she could go into a tizzy with a smile on face
    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    -trips face first into wall-
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    I read this one hundred thousand times and I think it is very sweet


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Wow, that picture is almost as hot as your write. It's getting warm in here.

    Wonderful


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 30, 2008

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    wonderful poem that adds to the heat of the picture, a picture may be worth a thousand words but a good poem is worth so much more, keep it flowing


  • onesugar gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Mouth watering So much said in so few words
    Well done
    ~sugar~

  • onesugar gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Mouth watering So much said in so few words
    Well done
    ~sugar~


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    you are just a hot ass this was nice dear stay horny


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    November 30, 2008
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    Wow.


  • Glasyalabolas
    November 30, 2008
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    I want to go into that candy store!

    Very nice imagery.

    Good write.


  • penman gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Whew!

    Oh my you could make anyone hungry with this one. Wow. Great job. So hot.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    mmmm..

    yeah, hot and very tasty!! mmmm..


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    November 30, 2008
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    lol sounds sweet

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