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Mayonnaise

Mayonnaise, love it or hate it,
every single bit!
Squishy and yucky
maybe I'll get lucky.

If there is any tomarrow.
I may just have to borrow
a barf bag today.
Hopefully it will be gone by May.

Oozing sandwich,
it makes me want to itch!
High in calories,
if only bee's

would eat mayo!

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this is for school!

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  • SmartBrick
    December 2, 2008
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    I'm back.Link is on it's way!http://allpoetry.com/item/show/4826517


  • SmartBrick
    December 2, 2008
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    Hey I finished my mayo poem!I'll give you the link!

  • SmartBrick
    November 30, 2008

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    LOL, mine won't be as good as your's!(I don't write mine till monday, and spelling book(as you probably guessed)I do on wensday) I work better under pressure


  • LilEmoPrincess
    November 30, 2008
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    highly random but good none the less made me hungery lol!!


  • omg-its-sara
    November 30, 2008
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    lol! this is for the journal, right?


  • isabellacohen
    November 30, 2008

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    Amayonnaizzing!

    Good to know what you like and what you don't,
    You wrote about it in a fun way
    i like it,
    best wishes,
    Isabella


  • LoveLikePoetry
    November 30, 2008
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    This made me want a sandwich

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