I shed this tear for all the sad times
you made me go through.
All the evil you did to me,
all that I have held back for so long.
I shed this tear for the years
that i wasted with you
the desolation you put me through
thinking that without you I would never be whole.
Did you think, I was really that weak?
I wasn't. I just wanted to see if my love would melt your cold heart,
that cesspool of blackness,
that abyss of evil.
Now I am free of you and lies,
free to roam the world, to love and be loved.
So this tear is for you, and your coldness,
may it wash a way the sadness in you and bring you happiness.
Author notes
The write I chose is 'Finally Shed' by hotchocolate
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by hotchocolate.
1100 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
We attract hearts by the qualities we display: we retain them by the qualities we possess. --Suard
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This is great here and it says alot! You did a wonderful job and thank you for your entry
Good luck!
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