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drained of her venom

pure hypocrisy
she chimes in galloping rhythms
quickened pace from the fall down out of the blue
she doesnt know its me

ive got a problem with this girl
hating her own two feet
the sense and the noise all flap their wings
to the same old drummers beat

drained of her venom
all the boys
pois-
on
drained of her venom
and she knows
its
likes
I!

SCREAM IN HER EAR IVE GOT A PROBLEM WITH YOU
SCREAM IN YOUR EAR IVE GOT A PROBLEM
I CANT EVER FEAR THE THINGS THAT PAIN US
BECAUSE ILL ALWAYS HAVE YOU NEAR

drained of her venom yeah yeah
cause of the way i look into her eyes
if she only knows one way of speaking to me
it sure does do the trick

IVE GOT A PROBLEM WITH YOU
IVE GOT A PROBLEM WITH YOU
I CANT EVER FEAR THE THINGS THAT PAIN US
BECAUSE ILL ALWAYS HAVE YOU NEAR

I ALWAYS WANT YOU NEAR!....

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  • movedon
    November 30, 2008

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    holy...freaking...shet. wow. this is....

    ok seriously...idk what to say. but AWESOME! AMAZING STUNNING WONDERFUL WOWOWOWOWOWO!!!

    good luck, but with this i doubt youll need much luck

    Mylee


  • movedon
    November 30, 2008
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    Thanks for entering! Your title is

    Drained Of Her Venom