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This night I'm all yours

This night I'm all yours,
so curve the desire
screaming in my waist;
burn me with your fingertips;
let your touch lift me
like a feather in the wind.

Don't be scared to be tender,
don't forget to be wild;
kill me with your lips,
and revive me with the warmth
of a hundred million kisses;
tie me to your heart.

Make the breeze
of the upcoming storm
blow through our hair;
let your beast devour me,
until this body is yours,
and no longer mine.

Just don't let the dawn
contaminate our moment;
make it unforgettable,
let it last forever,
love me like no one
has ever done it before.

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Option 4: Word Bank (word bank #2)

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 17

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    Thank you for your most beautifully expressed entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • vanessa lez
    December 24, 2008
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    awesome poem. i liked the last stanza a lot


  • artis
    December 5, 2008

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    Fingers that make a perfect match to kindle your desire, tongue to lash and fan the flames,

    hips forming an arched cathedral to worship in, as the beast is unleashed in increments of flesh, as the feast is left heated, quivering and softened, he slips in to ravish in joyous delight for both. Wonderful write.~~~Artis


  • butterflywriter
    December 4, 2008
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    Awesome...

    right on target, good girl!


  • just mercedes gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Very well done! Especially liked the final couplet.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    November 30, 2008
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    Nicely done. I like this poem. Great job.

    Mike

  • StarGrrl
    November 30, 2008

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    Sweet poem. I really liked the way you made it sexual without being crude. Good luck in the contest.


  • Meroza
    November 30, 2008

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    This sure is a hot take on the word bank and prompt. Such full of radiating love and tenderness, yet hot pure love for the act.

    Thank you for entering and best of luck.

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