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Diaries Of Life

 

 

 

Her life in a case
locked away in a cupboard
knowing that one day
to be discovered


there by her bedside
the last chapter -
unfinished

a ghost-writer to prepare
the last paragraph
the final full stop

an end to her story

the Diaries of Life

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt : Book
No more than 50 words

45 words used

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest with this poem I really like that this poem has an air of mystery to it - interesting take on the prompt!

    Keep writing

    Polly

  • meena krish
    December 4, 2008

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    I enjoyed this write and just like hawkeslake said its mystery leaves the reader to ponder about many
    things. Good luck in the contest.


  • princess Jewelcat22
    December 1, 2008

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    Sue this is wonderful!!! You did a truly lovely and such a brilliant job!! I love the way that you portrayed this piece!!1 this is excellent!!

  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    This is quite a mysterious little story, leaving us to ponder all the great issues -- what are the chapters like, who and what is discussed, and who, who will write that final paragraph??? A beautiful poem as usual. I always enjoy reading your latest!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Ingenious write....a little like what I was thinking of in the last week... a metaphor on our life like the chapters in a book...Enjoyed this tremendously! Bookmarked!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Is good
    Nicely formed and well versed. Says it all succinctly, great stuff


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    November 30, 2008
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    Wonder what they'll do with our unwritten pages - your FV is getting amazing Sis.

    Jem x

  • Bob Fox
    November 30, 2008

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    Life

    And I would think there is a unwritten book in all of us poet. Thank you for a very enlightening little write.

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