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Red Death

Rats evading the streets with a morbid fetish for bodies wracked with pestilence.
I trod over those who lay unwanted and consumed by night.




Sagacious Prince, holding all health within his walls.
Gallivanting among the weak, while captivating them with such a fete.



No vista is greater then mine, among the breathless, deep in these twisted culverts.
I gaze upon that impenetrable fortress an aura of health burning bright.



 
I seize my face, and sharpen my tongue.
Nobody can match my piquancy.
Just look out your window, many have swooned to these scarlet lips.

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The picture reminded me of Poe's Masque and the Red Death.

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  • silverscent gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    I enjoyed the depth your wide use of vocab created here. It's nice sometimes to read something that you can tell has had a lot of thought put into it.
    What you got from the image is something I wouldn't have thought about either, so I really enjoyed it for that reason too. Hmm it's a shame you didn't finish in time because you might have done quite well, if you know what I mean. Never mind, best of luck in future contests.


  • silverscent gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Here's your prompt

    http://alectwin.deviantart.com/art/Midnight-Stranger-33929722

    hope it's ok.

    The contest will be judged on thursday 11th. Thanks