A glow had shone for ages from the moon
and on this said occasion, winter's night
had summoned in the call while children soon
brought joy and well earned replicated light,
what new found re-creation would delight.
They stood without mere mention for affray,
too soon to be the apples of our eyes
instead the earth moved in with a display
to trees those children planted, what surprise,
whilst having no relations why they stray?
Shadows formed and as the trees grew high,
the woods would find impossible to break
snow had frozen late from one good-bye,
to lead a river flowing to the lake.
are little orphans somehow, our mistake?
Author notes
1.) Winters
2.) Children
3.) Apples
4.) Moon
5.) Shadows
6.) Snow
7.) woods
8.) Trees
9.) River
10.) Frozen
In a list
A contest entry
- Ten words for you by Neha Sharma.
700 points, ended December 22, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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This is so different. I liked your view for this theme. Nicely done. Thanks for entering.
Good wishes
-Neha
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kind of sad when you think about it, but a beautiful poem, creative use of the ten words, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I think you came up with an excellent poem.
I wonder how can you create such beautiful poems in so less time, and so continuously.
Your creativity is really working now a days
WEll im hoping you will keep on penning these wonderful poems and never stop 
Peace,
Lonely
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