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Thoughts at 3am

I love kissing you while making love,
your tongue inside
overwhelming my senses
skin tingles to first touches
sensuality assumes love’s karma
when lips embrace.

I love kissing you while making love,
fingertips expose devotions
peaks of umber on almond flesh
intoxicative moments caress
with soft lips
wind whispers desire.

I love kissing you while making love,
souls’ lips entwined 
journey beyond mere mortality
in sapphire embers instincts blaze
losing myself to sensual pleasure
glowing within you.

I love kissing you while making love,
feverish lust invites exploration
tasting passion’s exotic fruit
persistent torment demanding sedation
lips linger enchanted
by carnal reverie.

I love kissing you while making love,
bodies melting harmoniously
reaching orchestral crescendo
intimate warmth in orgasms depth
arias of divinity reveal
glimpses of paradise.

Darling, 
I love kissing you while making love,
just to steal a single kiss
before sleeping enclosed by you
dreams faded remnants of reality
when waking in your embrace.

Author notes

Inspired by:
Yanni, http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=GhV2ceRw2N4

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2428777 prompt 3

and a nightingale

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Comments

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 25
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    More tasteful beauty. Read at almost 3am.
    Really enjoy what and how you write.

    Buddy

  • The D O M
    December 22, 2008
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    Beautifully done, I hope you think bronze enough of a reward.


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    December 6, 2008
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    this is so beutiful, nice write


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Very sensual indeed.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    passionate "structured free verse" An experiment that works very well


    Great stuff

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