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Invite to Faylin Wood

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 ©2007-2008 =tytaniafairy        

  

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Forsake this land with faerie dust
whose evil imps have from this day
Be rid , the hell discomfort must,
Prepare themselves. "why this delay?"

Who fixt the curse to story myths?
A course proceeds a seethrough wood
For as you trace the span it shifts,
If make believe were understood? 

 

Eerie tales shall guide no one,
You're frightened of occuring threat
And journeys ends, where you begun
Surprised you haven't met us yet?

 

If failing that should you succeed,

These  fairy rings for you no doubt

Use circles that by chance mislead

So did you think we'd let you out?

 


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  • SEA angel gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    I agree

    Sparklets to the moon look like fairy dust left by a fairy band playing in the moonlight.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 30, 2008

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    i like this, it kind of reminds me of this thing i saw online one day, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, but with the vision you gave me of this place, i don't think you will have a problem.

  • StarGrrl
    November 30, 2008

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    Beautiful write. I like the take on the poem, the background you choose and how you included the pics in the poem to show readers where the idea came from. Best luck in the contest, it's going to be a tough one for Meroza to judge!


  • Meroza
    November 30, 2008
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    This is a brilliant take on the prompt, but to make it less confusing for others please add "prompt 1, photo 3"
    Now I adore this twist on a tale and it really do bring out life into the photo.

    Thank you for taking the time to enter and best of luck!


  • Lonely
    November 30, 2008
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    Magical.
    That was the first word that came to my mind after reading this. Intriguing and magical.
    Beautifully woven together. PErfect images, perfect background, and beautiful work. I hope I could start writing like that too and be out of writers block again..
    Best of luck in the contest

    Lonely

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