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Annabelle & Marjarie

Man...those girls were good
to me.

Remembering back
days of carefree.

Upon white sand beaches
clear water, rock n' roll
aired sunshine all that
mattered.

Naked truths in tanned skinned
lust's lying together under warmth
of a paradise sun.

Man... those girls were good
to me.

Remembering back
days of carefree.

Mojo blind
San Miguel buzz

Paid for by
good ol' usa.

Any port 'n a storm
saying thanks.

Man... those girls were good
to me.

Thanks...

            Annabelle & Marjorie


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Not what she was looking for but she inspired this one.

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  • Simone Brooklyn
    December 2, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this poem, Ned; I'd say it reminds me of some fun times I've had but, shhh....I'm always a good kid! ;] I love it!


  • Rheea gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    is Mojo blind kin to um pot? goodness brother this soumds illegal drink your nice legal TQ and be hush hush


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    man those girls..

    were good to you! yeah, just what I need to start my day with..a piece about women! l.o.l. you sure know how to get to a guys soft spot! like this inspired piece my friend! good job.


    • Rheea gold member
      November 30, 2008
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      He has thrown us over to party with two babes called Annabelle and Majorie me his own sister and you his best bud. Its the Mojo it done got to this boys brain.