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The River...

It plays enchanting melodies
When flows from the silver peak
Melting like an old candle
Angelic and unique.

It makes it's way through dense woods
To graaslands far away
Ripples do forget the boundries
To fly their dreams their way.

When winter takes it's last breath
And autumn plays the tune
Frozen river melts itself
Some beautiful february noon.

It tries to tell a thousand things
Have you tried to hear?
Some shadows of the past survives
Within it's depths unclear.

The glistening soul is innocent
And inside is pure
Season rests in it's eyes
It's nature queen for sure.

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Woods,Winter,Frozen,River,Shadows

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  • Neha Sharma silver member
    December 22, 2008

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    ah! this is so lovely. I loved the rhyme. Thanks for entering
    Good luck
    -Neha