with beads of perspiration
and breathless cry's
once more we drown
within our passion
with long sure strokes
and answered calls
once more we find
the love within
with every caress
and laughing tongue
the bond between
intensifies
defining moments
within the heat
our hearts on hold
as lust consumes
within each touch
our souls entwines
our hands reach out
connected and join
Author notes
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http://th06.deviantart.com/fs39/300W/f/2008/334/8/8/Struggling_through_the_rain_by_Dubai_Desert.jpg
A contest entry
- Picture Prompts - Reserve - no more than 20 lines by Cannonsfire.
3999 points, ended December 4, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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please put picture prompt number in AN's *do not comment or rate this, thank you*
It's a little too narrative, lacks metaphor in the showing of how you feel, i think the idea is good and just needs you to be a little daring and outside the box, to look deeper into whichever picture you chose. Feel free to edit for i will be returning to all these.
C
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