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Lost and found

Silent night becons its beauty extreme
Evening star shines lighting the theme
On this cloudless night none fall astray
Full moon brightly lights the way
silence my evening star, call my name
Bring me home my love, guide my way

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Contest poem, used both prompts

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  • lemmeXdie
    September 6
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    awe!!!!!!!!!! that is cute!


  • ylova
    December 1, 2008

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    I love the rhymes in this piece Thanks for entering and good luck!

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 30, 2008

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    JUDGED!!

    Beautiful, loved the serene sentiments in this short but elegant piece
    Very nice indeed

    All the best to you and thanks for the entry

    Ken