Silent night becons its beauty extreme
Evening star shines lighting the theme
On this cloudless night none fall astray
Full moon brightly lights the way
silence my evening star, call my name
Bring me home my love, guide my way
Author notes
Contest poem, used both prompts
A contest entry
- Swift Word Prompt by Ken-Maverick.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wonderfully written and nicely done with your prompts "silence" and "evening star". great job of having them flow into your piece so gently and not forced. you did very well with your spelling. i am very proud of you and the work that you have done here. it is a beautiful poem you have penned here. nicely done!
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awe!!!!!!!!!! that is cute!
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I love the rhymes in this piece
Thanks for entering and good luck!
Much love
Ylova -
JUDGED!!
Beautiful, loved the serene sentiments in this short but elegant piece
Very nice indeed
All the best to you and thanks for the entry
Ken
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