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Beauty of the Night

As I sit below the moon
I unwind from my cacoon.
With my wings and spirit now free
I fly high above the beautiful trees.
And as I fly snow slowly floats below,
Surrounding the shadows with a heavenly glow.
Ans as I witness the beauty of night
I hold on to the peace very tight.
Because if I know if it goes
It won't be mine anymore.

Author notes

4 words: Moon
Shadows
Snow
Trees

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  • Neha Sharma silver member
    December 22, 2008

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    nice verse. if has been used wrongly in the second last line i guess.
    Thanks for entering
    good luck
    -Neha


  • Poetic Butterfly
    November 30, 2008
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    That was beautifully written, it flowed very well. Nice write