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Unexplored World

Freshly cut pages
reeking of new smell.

soft fingers stimulated by
turning page after page.

mind racing faster and faster
as images form into a mass blur.

tingling the senses
into a world never before explored!

Author notes

this is my very first time ever entering a quickie contest
I have 38 to 40 words mentioned above
Prompt word was: Book
Best of luck in judging the entries and thanks for the contest

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  • countrybabe gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Brilliant

    This is brilliant for your first quickie. Well done my sweet hubby

    Keep writing and I'll keep reading

    Love Always
    Your Ap Wifey
    Countrybabe


  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest with this poem I think that "wreaked" should be "reeked" in the context of this poem, other than that I really liked the excitement of this poem.

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Beating gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow! This comes close to being the best thing I've ever read by you! Truly! This really resembles my own experiences everytime I begin a new book. This piece is definitely going on my favourites list!


  • Confusedboy
    December 4, 2008

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    Nice. sounds like speed reading to me. I used to love to speed read, stimulating the mind and heart. Thanks for sharing.


  • MYsecondchance
    December 1, 2008

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    everybook that is read is a world yet explored, awesome theme, i really liked how you described the sensations of this. awesome work.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Nice,

    I like how the imagery there so vividly, draws the reader in and for few words, you made a wonderfully expressed piece here. All the best to you in the contest my friend!

    Peace, Timothy


  • NyteShade
    November 30, 2008

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    I love how this reminds me of opening pages of a book to what the pages contain. The descriptions were just mesmerizing hmm I wonder what other worlds can be uncovered.
    Great write

    NS

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