sorrow expanded
until it ruptured all walls:
Eternal Joy
Author notes
This poem of yours is my prompt:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4745135
May God brings wondrous joy in your life, Poetess.
God does mysterious things. May Love be our only weapon. Joy to the World!
The Greek title means:
Joyous Message. I want to add: Christ is born ... thus: Χαρούμενο μήνυμα: Χριστός γεννιέται
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by hotchocolate.
1100 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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good job
veru good
reminda me of someone consumed with grief
but
has no outlet
finally, they let go
the wall breaks
it all leaves them
Read many of yours today.
wow, no one ever read so many
thank you
sorry about the flippant comment on your work
it was wrong
stuff going on
i expressed myself thru your verse
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This is a good write here! I really liked this and thank you for your entry
Good luck!
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You are quite simply the best. Your message is universal and transcends everything else -- love without end.
Excellent.
Garrison
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This is better than great! You have composed a fantastic statement of faith in a Senryu. I've never seen this done before.
Love,
Amera♥
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Excellent
The confinement of sorrow broken by Divine joy, a gift from God so freely given. Lovely write M. May we all have the wisdom to accept the gifts from above.
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A joyous message is good news. I like the image of your poem, I see heavy walls bursting apart with bright light. Sorrow makes an irresistible pressure that cannot be contained - it must change. Best wishes always!
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I hope there will be reasons to be cheerful after 8 years of sheer dread, lack of skill and blatant injustice. The fact that worries me is that BO is trained and sponsored by Zbigniew Bzrezinski - a man cherishing dangerous geopolitical ideas as becomes clear in his book "The Grand Chessboard". Yet I'll give BO the benefit of doubt for now. We will soon know what the election means. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, precious soul. Ack.
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Wow! So beautiful Myra =) I love this. Oh and I just saw your new picture. It's so pretty! you like like such a serene goddess
Which you are btw! Hehe. Good luck in the contest!
Much love
Ylova
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Thank you, Luvy
This is the message God sends through me to this world for 2008 -- I was also inspired by my preacher's message -- Rejoice in the Lord, always -- in this morning's sermon. He is the Rev. Hennie Reinecke of the Reformed Church, George, South Africa ... (Hallo, Hennie! I kept my promise, see?)
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