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Happily we go

Sleigh riding in the winter
is fun for the children
they slip and slide
through the frozen rivers
along the snow covered trees
giggling and laughing
as they sing christmas songs merrily.

Hours later they stop at Grandma's house
to warm their chilled bodies up
drinking hot chocolate
and eating freshly baked cookies.

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Max 35 lines. Used....winters, children, snow, trees, rivers, frozen

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  • Neha Sharma silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    Cute, nice and warm poetry. Thanks for entering.
    Good Luck
    -Neha


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    mmm...fresh baked cookies! sounds like grandma! cute poem you have here...brings back memories

    good luck


  • Griswold silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    Nicely done with the chosen words, you went pretty much the same way as I did for these words. Best of luck to you...Scott