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cursed within white

i have watched hopelessly
powerless
lost within tears
drowning
beneath self load and hate

i have seen disappointment
felt the pity
held the anger in hand
every breath  
hidden beneath the silences

and i have broken
trapped once more
deafened

Author notes

Prompt - "Silence"

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  • chilali
    December 1, 2008

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    Aww. So sad. A great write though. Beautiful. Thank you for your entry and good luck

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 30, 2008

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    JUDGED!!

    This is very sad indeed,
    Life can be full of disappointments at times,
    i know coz i've face just about everything
    Keep your chin up

    Well done

    All the best to you and thanks for the entry

    Ken