A winters day, the children play,
tossing snowballs the size of apples.
Moon rising in the east, end of day,
as they dodge and play in the shadows.
Boots covered in snow as they throw,
running in and out of the woods.
A bulls-eye throw, brother hits the snow,
little sister hiding in the trees.
A foot in the river will make you shiver,
it has not yet quite frozen over.
Author notes
Used them all in order because I'm a rebel like that. 
1.) Winters
2.) Children
3.) Apples
4.) Moon
5.) Shadows
6.) Snow
7.) woods
8.) Trees
9.) River
10.) Frozen
In a list
A contest entry
- Ten words for you by Neha Sharma.
700 points, ended December 22, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Nice attempt... I'm glad that you used all the ten words, each one of them makes the season beautiful... Thanks for entering, Good Luck
-Neha
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heck I didn't even try to use all of them. Was surprised tho that I did use I think it was 6 of them. We did write very similar though didn't we. Good job here. Thanks for commenting on my poem. It is appreciated.
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show off!...lol. great write (tho the last line needs a little tweaking, it's a little awkward)
other than that this is a very cute poem!
good luck
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