Slender,
.........................or thick.
Accordion-ed?
Sliced?
Temperature: Hot!
Fresh,
Salty.
Texture:.........Creamy.
Outside crisp,
For what am I?
Why,
A delectable
French fry.
A contest entry
- Show us how odd you are! by Noir mariposa...x.
1750 points, ended March 17, 30 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow
Truely well done, I simply love being ODD and you beat me. Great job nice format and substance and who doesn't love french fries. Congrats on the gold.
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hehehe very clever indeed. gotta love the french fry
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I love this
That's clever ^^
I think that's gotta be one of my favourite writes for a while
Thank you for writing and entering ^^
I wish you the best of luck,
Claire x -
lol just how I like it too...with the fries, of course
I love Mcdonald's french fries
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Haha this made me smile my mind was all over the place I love fries but was surprised by the poem thanks for sharing be well
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Woah! Smart!
There is so much meaning in this beyond what is on the page.. wow!
An amazing write, speaks so much about the modern world. Wow. Well done!
Your writing is a source of constant admiration from me
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*chuckles...i don't know if it's a turn on or I just so want to say 'supersize me!' LOL
C
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