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Whispered love

Silently seeking,
immoral pleasure.

Hands caressing,
hips that lie.  

Kissed in ... 
  whispered love.

Author notes

1. Pen me something beautiful in 10-15 words.
Something that will move my heart and soul.
Can be about anything you want!

A contest entry

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  • Sunkissed xo
    December 8, 2008

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    Such intensity and passion resides in your words, I can feel the desire and desperate love of which you speak. A very powerful write here, created in so few words, which is excellent. Well done. Thanks for entering the contest
    Peace ♥