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Folded wings. slow mourning tear.
Surrendered to the shuddering sobs.
Find no peace. searing pain.
to know you are there.

To know you are no longer there.
Time stands no more.
those eyes broken.
those golden wings.

Can't see you. can't hear you.
can't touch you.Unending.
sorrow. loneliness. fainting.

I stretch. MY finger.
To where you are.
All i feel is empty.
Blank. noise. Blank. pain.


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  • Abstract Image
    November 30, 2008

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    So sad. What a beautiful poem you have here it brought up some memories i had in the back of my head...good luck.