the smell of espresso and amber
the sound of her voice, so angelic
her hideous gold jetta
when she giggles it so cute
even more when she's frustrated
her sweet smile
and when she kisses my cheek
i think gone to heaven
everything
makes me love her
want her
more and more
My devotion is hers
but she doesn't know it.
cause we're just friends.
i live and breathe
to make her happy
to hurt her would be worse than death
my thoughts and dreams are plauged by her
but she doesn't know
because we're just friends
she loves him
and i have to be happy for them
i love them both
she asks me to be her bridesmaid
and i agree
because after all
we're just friends right?
A contest entry
- Simple Beauty by Sunkissed xo.
620 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Aww
I love the descriptions at the beginning, "the smell of espresso and amber", so vibrant and fresh. So very happy and spirited, yet so sad and regretful at the same time - a mixed bag of feelings. You have written this very well, and from the heart. If this is about you and your love, I hope everything works out between you guys. Thanks for entering the contest
peace ♥ -
i like this but im confused about the ending is she bi??????
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This is an ok poem but
what i like about it
is that i can feel the emotion oozing out of
it and i think that is a great thing to be
able to do.
Well done
Samuel
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