The deafening silence sung in my ears,
As I tried but failed to stop my tears.
The silence was broken by his voice,
My mind gave me no other choice.
It burns my mind, from inside out,
From my skin blood starts to sprout.
He never knew how deep it was,
How deep it still remains.
He never thought my heart had
The power it contains.
A contest entry
- NO MORE ENTRYS. by Ginger Woods.
700 points, ended January 1, 43 entries
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Comments
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I like it; thanks for your entry
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I love the wording very deep, I love the line "from my skin blood starts to sprout" wonderful work , thank you for entering my contest
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This truly is awesome.
You poetic skills, though always wonderful, are blossoming into a gorgeous, beautiful rose! Truly divine. And oh, the feeling! You write with so much of it! Your expression, your imagery, your EVERYTHING in this poem makes me feel alive with emotion. And by the way, your boyfriend isn't a "poo face". He's a really nice, genuine guy, and I'm glad you are happy together
Keep blooming lovely!
xxx
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awwww omg! thank you! made my day again!
thanks about my bf too
xxxx
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woa dude,
this is bloody awesome!
taz, ur flow is absolutely excelent. I really love your new style of writing, it is fantastic. i only wish this poem was about ur poo face boyfriend, so hed go away and die.
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lol, i like my new style too
thanks (for the compliment about my poetry)
xxx
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