In your hands, the essence of light shines.
Alas, sins steal the warmth.
Author notes
Prompt: hand
13 words
Picture Credit: http://kire1987.deviantart.com/art/Children-of-the-Gods-99515491
In a list
A contest entry
- 13 amazing words by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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I love
your take on this piece. The words are as illuminating as the picture! Certainly Trophy worthy Twinny!!!
Love Much!
becca
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Wow! You have said so much in such few words. You have really went beyond with this one. Best of luck in the contest, thank you for sharing and your comments as well.
♥
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Wow. 13 amazing words, I love Gypsy Butterfly's contests they are always so interesting! A wonderful write you have penned with interesting thoughts.
Best to you!
Love
Alyzeh
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An interesting thought penned here.
Very good, a lot portrayed in just 13 words.
Great pic too.
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so true... x
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amazing write! good luck to you in the contest
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in 13 words you are still one of the best, i think this was golden my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!!!
The sins of our ways do take away from the grace and beauty of his helping hands.'s
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very interesting picture
perfect example that short is sweeeeet
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Wonderful write.. In 13 words, you have said everything..
I loved reading this one, and I think you are a really talented poet
Keep writing And good luck in the contest!
Lonely
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This one is amazing to be only thirteen words! I adore this one a lot, and those contests there are freaken hard to come up with the good stuff for!
Best of luck!
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Very controversial. Nicely penned. Good luck.
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