Soft knock
resounding in heart,
soul effervescent
with inevitable opines.
Author notes
prompt ~ The Visitor
In a list
A contest entry
- in 10 stupendous words by Lavender Butterfly.
515 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lovely... x
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very sweet. there's alot going on in a few words. nicely done.
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Thank you
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Hey I guess that you are becoming pretty good at these little pieces of art. Again a lovely one. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
-Neha
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Thank you..I am quite liking these short poems and how you can say just quite as much in them as in longer ones...
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