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Sweet visitor

all locked up
she intruded my heart.
tapping numb senses.

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prompt ~ The Visitor

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  • Guide My Heart
    May 3
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    this is so sweet, I like this poem.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    cleverly creative... x


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    ooo...very interesting take on the prompt i like it

    good luck to you


  • Neha Sharma silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    Wow, its nice to read all these deep meaningful little verses. These contests must be on all the time I guess...
    Well, very nicely done. Thanks for sharing
    Good luck
    -Neha


  • crimsondew
    November 30, 2008
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    Beautifully expressed!

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