Your poison; luring and tantalizing...
...why have you come here?
Author notes
Prompt: The Visitor
10 words only
In a list
A contest entry
- in 10 stupendous words by Lavender Butterfly.
515 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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These Quickies are your forte for sure! It is so amazing what you seem to do with them! I lovce to catch up on them....!
Muah! My Sis!
becca
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Ahhh..nice! Funny how it gives me a dark picture at the same time very fantasy like. Great write! Good luckk!
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Excellent
Oooh I really like this one, amazing how you can draw someone in, in so few words.
Great take on the prompt.
Love it !!! Love the questioning.
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intriguingly engaging... x
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ooo...i really like the question at the end. Great take on the prompt
good luck
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Subduing each victim with the sweetest of poisons. It's very difficult to create a story in only 10 words, but you've done it. Best of luck to you!
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I think, you do so good in these short poems, I must say, you have a talent of explaining just everything in a few words. Unique! Do keep sharing!
Love,
Lonely
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This is so powerful, you do amazing on these short word poems here girl!
Best of luck!
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something to think on and something to fantasize on really keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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