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look its the love bug!

I was lost in a gray rainbow
I didnt know where to go

Then there was something on my back
I looked but it didnt show

It was singing a love song
But I didnt know what it was

It whispered in my ear
Hi Im the love bug

Together it said "We will fly
to find you a love"

My eyes glisten with  fear
I look at the bug

I grabbed the bug spray
good bye love bug!


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A contest entry

To you hannah hope you like it

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  • Evil-Laura
    November 30, 2008
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    woop my bad hehe


  • Hannie
    November 30, 2008

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    Awesome poem laura love. Just please check out the rules...U have to put what option you chose in your author notes. Please make sure you do that. Plus fix up the spelling of didnt in the first verse. Thanks a bunch for entering and good luck!!

    Hannie.