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My Love

Angel of earth whose touch reminds me I am alive.

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A contest entry

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  • Lady Altheia
    December 3, 2008

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    Sweet little one liner. Love can go a long way and shown in different forms. good luck to you in the contest and best of luck in your future writes.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    beautiful... x


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    "...reminds me im alive" great write and creative take on the prompt

    good luck


  • KayJay
    November 30, 2008

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    A wonderfully simple write that holds such powerful meaning... to touch another is to share life... Beautifully done.
    Ken


  • Room without doors gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Outstanding

    I loved the simplicity of this poem. You paint a picture of love that is both poetic and romantic in its essence. Sometimes a few well chosen words can be more effective than a thousand. I liked the simplicity and the imagery here- a soulful poem that is beautiful to read. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 30, 2008

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    So touching!

    It's hard to bring a vivid message in 10 words but you've managed to do that eloquently! It takes an to know an !!! All the best in the Contest!


  • BellaD
    November 30, 2008

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    Brilliant! You write the most powerful, meaningful poetry in so few words. Best of luck in the contest.

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