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Golden Silence

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We cannot hear it,

Silence all around, until

We stop and listen.

 

 

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Contest Prompt - "Silence"

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Haiku

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  • SoulWhispher
    December 1, 2008

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    well done, strong take on the prompt Silence, you have woven magic in a few words, this is outstanding, love and blessings John


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • chilali
    December 1, 2008

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    I love haiku writes! You did an amazing job with the prompt and this piece. Thanks for your entry and good luck

    Much love
    Ylova

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • oneeye
    November 30, 2008

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    Cyn, Whisper in my ear. soft is your breath, thank you for your solance. Your Words Are A Comfort To MY Soul. Three lines disected my soul.
    GF you did it again!

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 30, 2008

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    JUDGED!!

    Lovely take on the prompt,
    we cannot hear it but it can also speak louder than words
    Well done

    All the best to you and thanks for the entry

    Ken

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Quiet places
    November 30, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very true my friend. Wonderful poem. Don

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • arafura gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    what a great sound silence can be! Lovely poem.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 30, 2008

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    you know you are kind of right there, but i kind of sometimes hear a ringing but when i do hear that silence, it is as they say golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!

      I'm glad you stopped in to read my poem, and I'll be over your way to visit your pages ASAP!! Thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn

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