Confusion....
RAGE....
Depression...
The tears...
They must go away!!! FAR far away...
They burn at my soul,
Caressing my tears
Bring the pain....
The pain that must be destroyed,
The pain that must leave,
The pain only writing can dissolve...
Writing
or...
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.
.
him
When i curl up in fear...
I try to write
to destroy my destroyer...
But i fear sometimes it does not work
The ink refuses to flow...
and the pain inside me continues to grow...
What i can i do when the pain is so great
... before it is to late?
Then i think of him...
his smile,
his laugh,
his joy...
his...
.
.
.
just him
Everything about him!
and the pain can be eased by my memories of him...
The one with the sparking green eyes
The one with the laugh that is so contagious
The one who makes my heart fill with joy :-)
Confusion
Rage
Depression
My tears...
It's all the same,
It's all pain
But i can conquer it...
With a little help from my pen...
Or a little help from my memory... and the boy who never lets me forget the joys of life
Author notes
Written for a contest... :-)
In this poem are all the things, mostly emotions that cause me too write, but also a boy who is very important to me... and he is the subject and inspiration of the majority of my poetry. Emotions are emotional and sometimes not fun to deal with... to deal with them i usually write, it helps me to understand.
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This is not a terrible poem (for me) in my opinion, I is trying to be POSITIVE HERE lol
.... ummmm it's kinda ADD but so am I so "it's all good" haha :-)
A contest entry
- Take Me Somewhere We Can Be Alone... by ShatterglassSecret.
1700 points, ended December 13, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That was... absolutely beautiful. I don't think there's another way to describe this. This... gives me hope. Thank you doll.
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This is a great peom of emotions that arew overcoem by a boys inspirtions....I had a sister that inmpired me to write so i realte well to this. a great write that deserves gold. i bookmarked this poem!!
returnt the faovr?
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Wow, I'm glad I found you on AP, you have a great, clear way of expressing ideas. I could see this peice working perfectly for the contest. Very well done Photo Buddy. Can't wait to read more.
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A lovely piece, my best wishes.
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well written. you're right, poetry has a certain cathartic element to it, doesn't it? i like how you've explained that emotions cause you to write, but for your piece you picked a particular emotion. you're description of your feelings burns strongly, opening up a window into your head, which was just what i was looking for. thank you for your entry.
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yay!
amazing. love it! that's all i can say. very much my favorite, or maybe tied for favorite..... great!
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