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Lost in Plain Sight

Hello!
Can you hear me?
Can you even see me?
I’m standing right in front of you

Nothing I say…
Nothing I do…
Matters to you anymore
I’m invisible

Can you even feel my skin
Upon yours each night
Or do you imagine someone else?
Do you pretend its not me?

Or is it just me
Who feels so alone
Even though you are so close
I feel lost

Lost…
Alone…
But you are right here
I’m lost in plain sight

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  • Dalaney gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    great image to go with the title prompt.
    i was wondering if anyone would choose
    this one, and you did thank you for
    your time and your talent. love, lane