orchard-blossoms
softly fall across the western isle
like honey showers
bewitching a warm September
Author notes
1. Pen me something beautiful in 10-15 words.
Something that will move my heart and soul.
Can be about anything you want!
A contest entry
- Simple Beauty by Sunkissed xo.
620 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I want to be in this moment, you added some colour to my dreary summer day. Gorgeous as I have come to expect from you talented sister. Congratulations on your silver
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Wish that you could have won cause this is really good.Glad I got the chance to read it.Never stop penning!
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Your imagery and metaphor is always brillnat...
colorful and creative...
xoxoxox
mystic
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What a fine and colorful picture, full of hues of reminiscence and things we all can feel a part of. You capture all those things in so few words.
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Truly gorgeous!
The imagery here is superb, so magical and sweet as honey. I almost feel as if I am there on the isle, seeing and feeling it all. You really have penned something beautiful. Thanks so much
Well done! Thank you for entering the contest.
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Excellent
Perfect wording in this wonderful expressive poem. Can feel the content. Excellent job. Don
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Awww...this was beautiful!
"honey showers...bewitching September"
I love honey and my b'day is in Sept! So you definitely get my vote!
Nice poem...
peace.
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