to the point of points,
both nothing but something,
a creature that is us,
but diffrent,
but not to diffrent,
they are too few numbers,
for many are hideing,
they are,
creatures who live in the dark,
and also feed upon the blood,
that keep us alive,
they are,
vampires.
A contest entry
- Please cut it out... by Re-invention.
576 points, ended December 14, 2008, 17 entries
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I LOVE VAMPIRES
gosh nicely said
i so love this
as i do vampires
great job
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this is good...
good JOB!!
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nicely penned dear poet! you have some typos though
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I see you made your write very informative and yet with a pinch in darkness! wondeful, thank you for entering! -
I really like this piece.. Dark and powerful.
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