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I see forever in your eyes

My soul becomes
undone, every
time I go a
moment, without your
sweet blue eyes.

A contest entry

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  • Sunkissed xo
    December 10, 2008

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    Thanks so much for entering this in the contest, I really really enjoyed this sweet and magical write! Unfortunately I can't give it a trophy - I'm sorry. Please, please accept the applause points instead!
    You have a lovely day, keep up the great writing!

  • Sunkissed xo
    November 30, 2008
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    Wow. Thanks for using my AP name, I don't know if that was your intention, but wow, thanks, I'm honoured! Aww a shame I changed my username.
    This is so simple, yet full of a tender sweetness that is just really beautiful to feel, as a reader.
    Well done! Thanks so much for entering the contest
    ♥ Peace


    • jmk8602
      November 30, 2008
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      Im glad you enjoyed it,

      And I was having a hard time writing the poem, then I read your username, and for some reason it clicked in my mind. So it was intentional, in that, I garnered some inspiration from your name.